Nice way to put things. I like the style of your poem. It really transfers one into another world - a world of you Queendom. A nice expression. The only line that I don't like very much is the one with the chaise-longe. Maybe you can find another word for lounging?

Respuesta por Justine Knolle (20.09.2005):
Hi Claudio, Thank you for reading my poem! And thank you also for the compliments - very nice to see you enjoyed my work. As for your criticism: I prefer to leave the word 'lounging' in, as it alliterates with 'lazily' and 'longue'. Regards, Justine