Dear Anna,

you wrote a remarcable ballad of Gothik horror. I Like it very much. As I also write in English half of the time I understand your plea for correcting mistakes. Forf me it does usually my daughter who lived 13 years in USA. In your fine piece I think I found a minor error in the last line: one can loose HIS head...or ONE'S head.
Kindest regards
Irene

Respuesta por Anna Jansen (16.08.2012):
Dear Irene, thank you so much for your comment and correction :). I usually write and speak english the way I think is right- ergo: not always accurate. A friend of me already found severel other mistakes *argh* but after all I'm not even close to a native speaker or someone with years of daily practice (I envy you...) Kindest regards Anna